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P E R F E C T I O N

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I'm unperfect, a little chipped,
a sinner and a saint,

I'm not white or black, more like
grey or greyscale,

I'm not in a neat heartbox with
straight edges or classic content,

I'm a rebel, but shy
and I'm yours if you call me perfect.
What do you think? :aww:

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Copyright: Caja (petrova)
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I think I've read it all over about three times and still want to read it, but that last part. There's just something about it.

I think it reminds me of me, being a rebel but somewhat shy [ although I think that my being shy isn't very admirable ], the truth of it sinks in.

I'm... also surprised at the last line of the last verse. There are so many questions and so many statements I'd like to make about it, but as I try to resist the urge, I've chosen to say it's profound.

I find many things to be profound, even the simplest things. But that statement is definitely near the very peak of the list.